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Hate to ask this question again but I just want to make sure I'm doing this right. Spoiler is for Balsa.
Am I over explaining here? This is the rough draft so I am going to add more flavor and action when I go through it again, I just want to know if this is isn't too much. Later in this chapter there will be a lot more demonstration than speaking as well but for it to work I need to lay the groundwork.