>>76467948Oh, your (you) is definitely worth a whole lot more than you think. Thanks again!
Maybe I should finally give up on being a wizard - go on a little academic journey. There seems a bit to uncover. Do you have any suggestions on fics that go into the details you mention? I'd love to check them out with that in mind specifically. Wouldn't even mind you pointing at your own works, filthy sex-haver that you are.
>>76468500Don't worry about it! Again, you feeling so strongly makes me happy in its own way. So from what I understand you'd have liked Matsuri to be more confrontational in the moment while being less "scorched earth" in the aftermath?
>>76478197Thanks, anon. I'm currently basking in your praise. It means a lot. Painting a proper picture for the reader seems like the hardest thing to do, since I do see the scene in front of me quite vividly as I'm writing. But to manage to bring that "vision" on paper... I'm glad it seems to have turned out alright.
>coconut sceneyeah, not happy with that one either. Rewrote it a ton, but I was too far into the setup to have the balls to cut it completely. Maybe should have reconsidered.
>stutteringI'll keep in mind to go a bit easy on that in the future. I used it mostly to express the "drunken-ness" of the party, but I'm sure there are other ways around that.
>I want more.Even more happy to hear that you're checking out the other works. Feel free to leave your opinion any time, I'm almost always lurking ITT. No pressure of course.
>>76464775not planning on it, but who knows. We
Ruffians are a fickle bunch of meheras. Have fun when you get around to it!
