>>31765528Wonderful piece love! You are getting less ESL with each piece that you write.
Only thing that I would comment on is the mention of the meeting that elects an elder under "Societal Structure".
Do you think it would be appropriate to give this meeting a little more significance, even if just giving it a name? Since the villagers would essentially be entrusting their lives to the elected elder, in a way, it would make sense to have some cultural significance, right? Seems like that would be right up your alley.
Other than that, I have nothing to say aside from you did good!
And you deserve some gentle kisses for it~ 