>>5311908Updated my story a little bit. The more I write, the more ideas I have on what to continue it with. With the basic plot notes I have jotted down, it'll unfortunately easily breach 15 pages by the end.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQsSnE0I9cI9SPlupPtG_e8UeiLYe_-Xe3_fgzIAwp9T9G9na4-tZZR0nVzBhJntQo_zgy8zsxqDtNY/pubAs before, feedback so far would be great. It's my first time writing a narrative since high school, where I used to barely even pass creative writing. Any and all feedback would be incredibly helpful to ensure I don't just produce a mess.
