>>76939709Cute... Nice job! I have almost zero experience with voice packs since I never bought them, but the delivery seems just fine. Maybe if you want to lean into the roleplay a little more have a bit of a longer pause between each line, or play with the idea of leaning farther away from the mic to give the illusion of approaching, leaning in close to whisper, stuff like that. Don't change everything around based off of my thoughts, tho! If they're all finished up no need to redo 'em.