>>7008956Watched from minute 29 to 35
>Good thingYour understanding is apparent and made your summary of the read paragraphs incredibly natural. The middle-english came out fluid.
>Bad thingSome sort of pointer to the line you're reading would be useful.
That model is clipart level. You don't need the best avatar in the world but this is is too simple/bland.
>>7009066Watched from minute 54 to 60.
>Good thingNo dead air. Not a single second. What you're talking about isn't substanceless either. This is an incredible feat too since there wasn't a single line of dialogue during that segment either. It was all you.
>Bad thingKind of echoey, like you're in a large room. Compared to ProfBloom at least. Might just be me.
