>>99311261Ill admit that halfway through it i was going
>man, this is good but scorecreep is settling in on real timebut you managed to tie it all together last second and left me satisfied.
However i feel like you accidentally "dated it". Basically, without the context of the recent discussions about Maidronii...your fics feels a bit schizophrenic specially the FWMC+Bae bit. Its nothing that cant be fixed with some minor words here and there like "at school we learned there was a war" and some clearing up in sections where it gets confusing.
Still, great job. It was a fun read
