>>85032007It looks fine, I have no taste for feet so I can't comment on that. Maybe cut back on the stuttering in Mori's dialogue, it makes her look more special needs than flustered. I personally wouldn't refer to Kronii as a Canuck either, cause while true it's not something that's readily apparent about her or relevant to the story in anyway, as well as switching between 'reaper' and 'shinigami' interchangeably. But you mentioned you were struggling with good epithets so I won't be harsh about that.
