>>73053797I fucking love this. This is the kind of fun and hype I want to feel when coming here to read. The action is probably some of the best in the archive and I personally find it great how you put aside some realism to create some of the coolest sequences I've seen in a written medium. The way you write movement flows really nicely and there's enough other things going on during the fighting to make me care. I could picture everything so clearly and it felt like a high-budget anime was playing out inside my head. The finale was the cherry on top with Anon tanking all those attacks and I liked that you recreated the picture in your post.
I'm with Koyori on this, how is he still alive? I wish I could express just how excited the action got me, because my eyes were glued to the screen the entire time.
His interactions with all the characters, not just HoloX but Shion too, were charming to read. Gives me a lot of Dante vibes. In fact, is Anon just Dante in this? I think I would have liked to see some more plot weaved in since a lot of this was Anon just wailing on the girls, but 16k words is already a hefty chunk so I understand wanting to leave it for later. You've hinted at a more sombre past and Koyori's supposed hypnosis potion, so I'm really fucking excited for the next part-
>don't expect a second part anytime soonoh...
That aside, thanks for dropping this. I'm coming back whenever I need to write an action scene myself!
