>https://rentry.org/From-Agra-with-LoveI love the ship names, very good job.
Also, great to see how you portrayed the Sabatangan Tupai coming in, totally unannounced. Dwi Love!
you should change the earlier mention of 35 galleys to 12 though, for consistency.I do wonder, what was in those Agra rockets for them to do so much damage. Risuner gem magics?
Id add a mention that not all of the Berlayarmatahari were captured, I would think it realistic that some of the ships escaped, although perhaps not Dwi the Fool's.they got a steam frigate... oh dear.>https://rentry.org/Ceres-Liberation-Day<3
nice to see the kronies winning for once, and to get explanations as to why the local risuners may actually like them.
