>>84070833mummeh did a script or two on her other channel where she's the recipient, so I used that as orientation, but yea, I do agree it's was rather difficult to write in a way that makes the story comprehensible without making it sound too artificial. like you said, it's awkward, but at least i tried. thank you!
>>84070782i'll do that next time i decide to write one. do you have any preferences that make it easy to read?
>>84071166thank you!
It's because I'm not experienced in writing on top of being a german ESL. I can use all the feedback I can get.
