>>30657672The changes were actually primarily in the "bossy Suisei" and "Shy Suisei", the rest was minor stuff. So the changes were, in fact, primarily focused on her personality. The smut was already sufficient, just the characterization that wasn't.
>>30657066When I finished writing the fic, I had a feeling it wasn't all that special. The thread confirmed that, but I was pretty much " ok, thread doesn't like it but so long as commissioner does, it doesn't matter ". Then came the long feedback text in my mail that evening and the rest is history. The thread had no involvement in how I felt.
