>>24792905I write and edit English scientific publications for a living. Here's my take on your description:
>A calm and mature person with a soothing voice and a silent laugh. She is regarded as a mother figure by her chat, a role she has come to accept after some initial hesitation. She has developed multiple personalities as a result of her prolonged shut-in lifestyle.Other small fixes/recommendations:
>"fans name" should be "fan name">"likes" should be capitalized to be consistent with the other category names>"Prefered" is spelled "Preferred">"Mental Problem" should be "Mental Problems" because you have more than one there>"survivval" should be "survival">"Sing" should be "Singing" to keep tense with "Gaming" in the same chart>the "game" in "survival crafting game" should be plural because she likes both Raft and Minecraft>if she mentioned playing other MOBAs besides League then you can have MOBA, otherwise I would just replace MOBA with League in likes for now>if you want to do meme stuff in likes you could put Zeta, since Kaela pretty much confessed her love to her on twitter and apparently they spend many hours in the early morning just talkingBesides this stuff, it's a cool card that's pretty amusing
