>>46481219I just read both chapters of Lost and Found. First off, it might be a good idea to double check your grammar. There were a fair few awkward sentences, odd capitalisations and missing full stops. But other than some grammar issues, I think the prose is actually well written, particularly the descriptions/expostion (the dialogue could use some work). Just as a side note, "They're" usually flows better than "They are".
I think Bae and Anon got familiar with each other a bit too quickly, but it wasn't to the point where I was doing a double take. I personally would have preffered Anon to be a bit younger since a ~20 year age gap is too much, but that's just my opinion, people are allowed to be into that.
I liked Bae's characterization quite a lot, and all the characters in the office felt lively and fun. The comedy has potential and was heading in the right direction at times, but couldn't quite make me laugh.
I don't know how this story flew under my radar until now, it's really good so far. I'll be on the lookout for chapter 3.
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