I procrastinated and agonized over it a lot, but the Marine chapter is done. May take a small break to try and get my head back on my shoulders properly. Next chapter or two will probably be more exploratory and character-centric.
Coco keeps getting cucked a bit but her not being in the party proper made sense in the context I gave it, I hope. Marine's fight went on 17 fucking turns somehow. I liked toying with the idea of Marine being just as much of a flirty dom when given a position of power over someone as she is a barely-contained sub. I'm not sure if I'll fuck around with a Bad End with her because it'd essentially just be group /ss/ with Marine leading the charge. To be truthful, though, I'm not sure how happy I am with Marine in this - I feel like I did better by a landslide in Landlubber Lover but eh. Hopefully you enjoy it.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ab_91hzpU27zwhK_DnaLFnvm0TG-viNCGDO6gI_8Qxk/edit?usp=sharing