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Why are you putting double newlines after every sentence, are you a child? Do you think this is a school paper you're turning in to teacher to get marked down for MLA errors? If you are you're getting an E because your grammar is terrible and you have failed to provide any supporting facts beyond your thesis. You have even failed to maintain a consistent subject throughout the paper, despite it being less than 100 words; please see me after class, this is very disappointing.
