>>26524911Hehe, that was me! God I love that fanfic. It’s a Childe from genshin reader insert rather than anything Vtuber related and it’s one of my all-time favorites. Such a good whump story and that little addition about the weight of the collar is such a fantastic detail. If you want the link lmk; I was thrilled to see that in your story because it reminded me of the fic I mentioned!
As far as suggestions or recommendations go, I don’t really have any besides paragraph breaks! I’m not sure if controlc just doesn’t allow you to skip lines/make paragraph breaks, but it can make the story a little easier to read if you break up paragraphs whenever the topic changes or when a new character speaks. Definitely just a minor little thing that I like to use when I write so don’t feel pressured. Amazing stuff all around!
