>>81189518I think the line "A paid dick is still a dick" is a little stiff. Something more like
>So what if it was? I still get laid, and they ride better than any horse in Botan's entire outfit.Then the retort might be better delivered as
>And how many prescriptions has Koyori had to write for you to keep your piss from burning? Or do you need the special comb now? Or alternatively
>So how much extra do the clean ones cost ya? Or does your salary make you settle for the STD roulette? I'm not terribly sold on the method being to call Azki a broke lookin bitch. You might need something either more subtle or alluding to something about how she conducts herself, the hobbies she has, or the streets she goes to. Otherwise, it falls kinda flat since Fubuki is getting male whores, how would any look like her? Unless she's going for dudes in drag. Maybe a more Fubuki style of getting laid STD free would be something like
>I just find the ones fresh on the market, before they even turn 16. No chance of catching something if they haven't had a chance to catch it themself yet. 