>>22710668That is fair, however, I feel like they are still extremely girly.
I think once you go girlier than griffith you are pretty much in trap territory and anon specifically asked how to make it less feminine.
Pardon, I feel like I am coming off as rude.
>>22710930Thank you for being polite despite my bluntness
I ended up drawing is not something I would have gone with either I just wanted to illustrate well what I meant.
Your art is pretty, I do not think there was anything wrong with the sketches.
I am really not trying to be rude, I think everything you drew for him so far looks unmistakably like a girl.
This is probably the last suggestion edit I would do.
What do you think?
