>>40780730Phone almost dead, so I'll be quick with this. Looking good, the only comments would be about the followers of the first expedition, and island ownership again. If Eliah gathered 10k followers, I feel it would make sense for some to be left behind on the mainland before venturing out to sea. Ya know, so that while they are out there securing the promised land, the ones left behind can further spread his word to gather even more influence and followers.
And not all the islands remember? Want to give something for yahanon to play with, as well as giving you both a shared conflict to interact over. I'm watching your sneaky ass, trying to get them all for yourself. Not on my watch!
Other than that, looking good! Also will be expecting a story of the first trekkers and their arrival on Argead in the future, I have a feeling that would be kino!
