>>27681012I wish I was able to comment on it last thread but I really liked it! I was one of the sisters who mentioned wanting to create something for it too so reading some more of it play out was really nice. I agree with her too, I'd love to read it if you rewrote like that. I can guess what happens in phase 2 but the way you wrote/phrase the ritual and teased part of it was great, even if it was written from an outsiders point of view I could still feel how both the new inductee and the elders around her felt... sisters all in love and full of love and excited for one another, all united by their lord... I currently keep thinking about the whole scenario of someone unsuspecting and in need stumbling across them all only to be absolutely captivated by Vox and consumed into the cult but we'll see if I ever make anything of my own about it!
