>>49721444Sand Planet: Chapter Two
Tags: Adventure, action, (you), AZKi, piracy, realistic fansty
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQZHY4frTs_NPM8EX7TS89ms-ucCc0i1XfvXO7nxlbX28d7jqZSrPzYXxTvVi5UQBThXdspPp7nx00g/pubI tried to be more descriptive and give the dialogue a less stilted, wooden tone. I also made sure to spell Chloe's name correctly. I hope you enjoy and I hope this one is a bit better.