>>40666875NTA, but I somehow had missed this one. Here's my review, if the author is around:
I liked this fic, particularly Kuro's characterization in the first half. That said, it felt a tad rushed at moments - the second half feels like it missed a scene or three before the smut, particularly with how fast Anon just went along with everything. Anon also acted a bit too dense for my tastes. Fubuki is barely a character here, but that's ok - this fic isn't really about her. I would have preferred to see a bit more of the white fox, but that is mostly due to the type of story I prefer. And talking about preferences, the confession lacks the build up to have a big impact, but you can only do so much with this word count.
Overall good job, even if I felt it could have used a bit more polish at times
