>>12491912Well, I finally touched up this Shadowlive chapter into something I'm more satisfied with. Went from 2k words to 5k but that's fine, now there's some actual plot. The accent should be less cancer now. I even proofread it this time, but there will still be the usual past-presente tense inconsistencies because I can't for the life of me figure that shit out.
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Okayu, Iofi, Ollie, Risu 