>>51808860Right now I'm hoping to bang out two more chapter before I go up to this family gathering where I likely won't have time to write for the week. If I can, I'll write more but I doubt you'll see anything from me until monday.
If nothing else, I hope it at least serves as a kick start to creativity. I can't count the number of times I've become inspired just by virtue of a new experience or place, so maybe this'll be a blessing in disguise.
>>51805898>refer to (you) in the third personI will. I wasn't sure which people preferred so I went with first rather than third. I'll switch it to third form now on. Thank you for telling me. I'll also try to keep adding more action in the dialogue heavy scenes.
I'm glad you think I'm improving. That's a relief to hear. I've been doing my absolute best to fix every critique given to me and I'm glad it's showing. Thank you for reading and helping me work the bugs out.
