>>35641525Thanks man. I agree with the pacing was definitely a little slow for chapter 2, the next chapters will definitely be more faster paced. I'm still trying to apply less is more to some of my writing so it's a work in progress.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and are looking forward to more. I got a pretty packed schedule next week so I don't know how much time I'll get to spend writing chapter 4, but I hope to write it soon.