>>36292540There's no real reason to believe any foreshadowing happens when it's so blatantly spelled out.
>Even if they had grown to have the same sort of mind as yours, to grow beyond their base instincts as you once did>The mosaic of red that made up your eyes, a legacy of your ascension>Your wings were fluttering, just like they always doThis story is infuriating from a writing perspective because there's zero subtlety. All of it is empty shock and conspicuous signaling. Names are obvious. The word 'disgust' is also used far too many times without any significance to the word. Research how flies actually eat.
>You look at the empty pews on your side of the church. There was no way they would have come here. Your family didn't approve of this, either. They didn't understand. They wouldn't understand.>Weddings are nerve-wracking. There were butterflies in your stomach. Your bride simply had regular ones.>“Then by the powers vested in me, I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride.” Your jaw unhinges, and a long tube spills out of your mouth, drooling in anticipation. You lean in for the kiss, pressing your lips to hers, smearing her face with translucent slime. Your drool splatters her dress, dying it in your colors. The crowd glowers, seething with revulsion at your display, but you weren't here for them. You're here for her. 