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Amazing model for a first yimer. Hat's off to you Sena, I'm sure it will look even better as you tweak it further.
Now I know you'll never read this, but here's my unsolicited advice anyway:
>head
The mouth and eye movements look good as they are, but you didn't go far enough for the full range of expression. Eyes need to go wider for the full surprise/excitement (and to follow the shrinking pupils, as it stands they keep shrinking while the eyes hits a ceiling), and the mouth ought to reach an opening that matches a yell or a laugh. In short the face looks perfect for placid speaking, but requieres a wider range of emotion.
Also the front locks of hair look like they slide a bot too much like a separate piece, but it's barely noticeable.
>body
Nothing much to say here, only needs more shading and some articulation on the wrists as final touches.
