Alright, I am happy to announce that Carmelina has been properly revamped. It's no longer a two-parter, as I put all of it in one file (removed the whole "part" thing, too.
Really should've done it since the very beginning as there wasn't much for part 2 anyway (around 800 words compared to 2.5k in the 1st part)).There were also some small adjustments here and there.
https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vQLeOx8kQVKHejGC3NfNbB9GDdpV3r4XM28RZGQHFxPePvgizATPLWB0Y3iV3E0gm0olskrlptMd6YJ/pubThose who've read it already, hope you will find it worth re-reading. Those who haven't, hope you will give it a try.
