>>57354945I'm very glad you liked it. Once again I am super relieved to hear I got Marine right and her banter with Anon right as well. My goal is to capture the relationship Marine has with her chat.
Anon joining quickly was intentional,
Marine and him are/were going to discuss "the topic" in the hypothetical second chapter. Another consequence of truncating chapter 1 into two parts.
> It might have gone too far into purple prose territory at timesYou know part of me had a fear of this, but I wanted to really make this hit. Would you mind giving an example for future reference?
Thanks for reading and the kind words. I suppose I should get back to it once this WIP is done.
>The way you describe scenery and the senses is incredible and absolutely something I'm going to come back to for reference. y-you too
