>>66812869Thank you for sticking with it and giving me pointers. I'll keep practicing and keep trying to make each chapter better. Especially with those guiding questions you put because that's actually what I've been trying to iron out with what will become the Botan-Towa plot. I want it to be such a big, paradigm altering point in her life that it shapes her into the more sullen, serious character of book one.
Thank you as always. I will keep trying my best.
