>>10238662It's a good effort. Some genuine criticisms though from one amateur to another.
>Those lobster hair bits on the top of Kronii's headThe topology for them looks a little strange. This kind of extends to a lot of your models after having a quick look too. I'd recommend looking up some wiremesh topolgy pics on pinterest and twitter to get a good idea of what to do in certain areas, since they evolve your models from a bunch of spheres and rectangles to a more proportioned and proper form. Proper topology is very important, even for stuff like anime girls and small chibi gremlin forms.
>Walfie's styleFrom another quick search it seems like Walfie hasn't actually done any sketches of Kronii in his style, so I'm guessing you're going completely reference-less for this, right? I think this might be a major reason the model looks a little iffy, since some seemingly minor details like the head size, textured details and even the layout of the face looks just off, leading to this uncanny valley effect. Waiting for a proper Kronii drawing, or taking lots of time to study and learn from Seafoam Boy's attempt at the MYTH models would defintely lead to a major improvement
It's mostly just those two. Personally I can't imagine Kronii looking good in a 3D enviroment, but that's personal opinion. Other than that you've done a fine job. Maybe try bumping up the resolution on those textures since the colours don't look very crisp, and also try playing around with the shader settings and see if you can fix those lobster antennas, and you can turn this from a 5/10 to a 7/10.
