>>41180061>>41180061In a few moments the character's voices are drowned out and they talk kinda samey, but otherwise a solid improvement. I third what other Anons said - Korone and her grandma was the highlight of the chapter. Other than that, I like how much we learn about Kuro's relationship with her gang despite the limited screentime.
Twenty minutes before reading this, I decided to axe deliquent Botan from my take on the concept due to not getting it to work. I'm glad someone is running with the idea 