>>28887522Somewhat surprisingly, the flow of your narrative is coherent, and you've made few errors in grammar and punctuation. It's relatively easy to digest, and what's there is entertaining. I'm enjoying the back-and-forth between Botan and Anon.
I've only got two requests, seeing as you've introduced Koyori and presumably will be introducing more characters in the future - first, don't lose track of the original vision for the story. It's Botan and Anon, not Botan, Anon and the rest of Hololive.
Secondly THERE'S AN NSFW TAG SO WHERE'S THE HAG LION SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX
