>>91704942good post liggerman.
Overall, I find Naughty Naru a decent piece. While I was initially off-put by the extremely puffy vulva, the sweat and neko neko outfit really brought it together. As the story progressed, it seemed to be that of a mesugaki brat getting corrected, something that would rather fit Coqui quite nicely. However, as the story progressed, I...
I unfortunately felt that there was a certain rushed nature to it. The tempo was a bit off. In reality, I believe that if a mesugaki brat was getting the dicking of her life like this, perhaps there'd be more emotional beats. As it stands, it comes off like a well-rehearsed routine, which is perfectly fine in its own right.
However, the excessive use of ahegao and toragao has something of a ludonarrative dissonance with the rest of the piece in part due to its flagrantly beautiful artstyle. While extremely visually appealing across the board, with a few rather busy pages intermingled in, I overall found this quite entertaining.
Though it lacks a certain narrative edge that I personally find appealing in a mesugaki brat being thoroughly and righteously corrected until they are a subservient fuckhole for all their partner's desires... I'd still give this a solid 7.5... 7 out of 10. Though, to properly capture Coqui, it would require a fair bit more humiliation. Thank you, Liggerman.
