>>39619494After a quick reread I see what you mean, I think I'll do some editing on part two after I finish the actual duel in part three to clarify things I don't explain during the pre-fight/fight.
Can you explain by what you mean with ' a few hiccups here and there'? I don't actually have an editor so this thread is basically the only other people that have seen this.
>>39640255Honestly I started this entire thing off of a joke so I felt like I had to do the bait and switch even if the fic has basically outgrown it due to worldbuilding creep.
I'll see if I can adress the 'silent' problem as well in following parts.
