>>12304820Good, very good. Came twice (probably more later)
I can definitely see the time you took to edit it. There’s none (or at least a lot less) of the common trip ups with spelling, punctuation and word repetition you see a lot here (not to insult other authors/fics)
You did a good job on managing so many characters while keeping things moving, and the smut descriptions where hot as fuck.
Well worth the wait, thank you for the great story anon.
