>>62402961You had a good idea with the skirt on the first design. The jeans on the new one feels way too normal and casual for someone who's supposed to be a bird/alchemist vtuber? I'm guessing the clothing isn't fully realized yet, but the coat could either use a bit more adornments or even just make it look more fantastical or arknights-y. I hate to mention Nijisanji (even more so, Iluna of all generations), but if you want a unique student look (were you still going for a college student theme?), you can check out their designs since I believe they're all supposed to be attending a magic academy.
