>>82325089Thanks, I can't expect feedback for an unfinished WIP but I'm glad to hear it had potential at least. The announcement made me pretty emotional, maybe I'll pick the WIP back up if I feel like it'd be honoring Aqua's legacy at some point. The idea was more to focus on the three women on their own, plus the sex scenes with you. The SoL house life stuff would mainly be there to hold it together.
My first idea for a "side story" was Ayame lying about her portal - it'd actually be teleporting her to Siberia, to a murderer hiding from the police in a lonely forest. She'd talk to him for a bit before consuming his body and soul, to keep her body young and to reinforce her humanity (to keep her demonic, bestial side in check). She's actually been banished from the demon realm so she can't rejuvenate there, but she won't admit that to her husband and her fellow wives.