>>33530736Yeah, pretty much the only way I could see a writer finding a way to 'dodge' writing the initial matsuri sex scene is if the entire fic was framed around Aqua trying to find out why her boyfriend is like this. With the entire story effectively framed like it's an NTR thing with the shocking discovery of the diary happening around the same time Matsuri's released from prison; even then I don't think that's a good alternative emotionally to the fucking matsuri rape scene since this way involves fucking up the outline in a way that might just kneecap the impact of whatever gets written.
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>PekoyakonThis one I feel like it needs someone who can write third person limited really fucking good since the 'progression' would be about an old hag gradually getting 'corrupted' as she starts peeking deeper and deeper into her daughter's sex life. Slowly escalating from hearing the sex from thin walls, all the way to literally peeking and getting caught by (You)
