>>21601951Oh yes. This is the stuff. Exceptional work, Anon. I absolutely can't wait to see how you continue this next chapter.
Regarding the writing, there's only one mistake I could find. You call Roboco "Robosa" twice in the story. I'm not sure if that's some other name you use for her, but it's also the name of her fanbase, so it's a bit clunky to read.
Aside from that, the break from the SuiSora to the RoboLamy section is very sudden, and you don't have any dividing marker. Not a problem, just a bit unexpected.
