>>39941392>>39941481>Because of the hard line between Hime's left hand and thigh makes it look like her hand is hovering there.>Hime's other hand looks like it should be playing with her hair, but it's also just kind of there.>The musculature detail around the characters hand and joints make them look more masculine >Probably a lot more "less is more" when it comes to line economy>Some of the two tone shading looks inconsistentI think it still looks good otherwise. Wrangle some of that detail and slim those shoulders and it'll look magnitudes better though.
