>>61791338This was a good read. The exposition felt kinda shoehorned in at times, but I do understand how difficult it can be to slot required explanations into the narrative. I would maybe recommend revealing some of it through dialogue instead.
The characters and dialogue were great as well, it felt very natural and wasn't overcomplicated. I also liked (and fully get) the focus on Elira's tits. They are quite a nice pair of melons.
