>>21610482I'm gonna say something real mean because I think you have lots of potential and should hear it.
For the love of all that is good please stop being a renderfag.
You are ignoring major mistakes in your early stages hoping to fix them in coloring and detail.
>You can get away with a lot of shit drawing animeExcept you can't. Her back looks like its in her front in the final render.
You don't have to draw apples and oranges to get better. You can study cute models and other sexy anime bitches that people draw.
You've already got a good sense of where to put your hard and soft shadows, now make sure that the object you are rendering below is actually good.
You can't render anything from pic rel that would look good unless you are ignoring it completely and painting on thick.