>>32078310>>32087222>I missed the NTR discussion at workUnfortunate.
>>32090137I actually think there's nothing wrong with captions in concept. The reason most of the ones on /trash/ come off as weird to you is that the people over there just fucking suck at writing. They're incredibly melodramatic and self-indulgent, couldn't write natural-sounding dialogue to save their lives.
If you want a decent structural baseline for what makes a good NTR/S fic, the VN "Kashidashi Tsuma, Marina no Netorase Houkoku" by Atelier Sakura is one of the quintessential genre entries and is moderately widely known. Shouldn't have any trouble finding a rip. On a personal note, I like things getting a little more extreme, and that masterpost I made a while back contains better examples in various other forms of media:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRXcqGfE39q-034wxzLdySgvmlFmSRvUx775m-3kP0FyrYWyxwUfDj8kPiqQ3d2zS_WwW4x3gy0eZ_5/pub 