>>48893150Koyo is great. I'm still struggling to think of a way to properly express how she talks in writing. If the feelings hit home, then my fic has succeeded.
>SpoilerThat fucking sucks man, I'm always sad to hear about someone when they stop writing. Good luck, hope you find your groove again someday.
>>48900897Upon a reread, I agree. It would have worked better with the number four or three, but then I guess there'd be no point. Thanks for reading.
>>48901062I had ideas for one as well, despite the fact that I had planned for this to be a quick, spontaneous oneshot. A comeback for the fighters using the pieces that are already set up might make for a cool sequel, or even a series. I say this every time I write a oneshot, but never go through with it thanks to my other in-progress stories. I'm glad the feelings came through.
