>>34614435Well, one thing that I would like to see is a lot of "participation" from the Saplings in the story, I think Sapling would be happy to give you a few characters to play with if you asked him. Always keep in mind this is as much their story as it is yours.
Also, and this isn't really my place to say, your character and all that, I would love to see more highborn? posh? dialogue from Sherah. Example would be instead of saying "Sorry about that, anyway my name is Sherah." she would say "I apologise for that unseemly outburst, noble shaman. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Sherah, and I am a shaman myself, hailing from the distant land *f /risu/."
She is supposed to be an important person, so giving her extremely unique dialogue compared to the common Risuner would help distinguish her, imo.
