>>76464037Not a detriment in the least, but it was more so just an expectation I had due to the build up of the lust. At that point you want to slam the object of your desires in every possible way you can muster, and the object in this case seems like she would want the same. Like it feels like it was a lot of subconscious fantasies of the two of them finally breaking to the surface, and it seems like there would be a ton to unpack. Just something to keep in mind down the road.
And yeah, the sensations of the skinship, the taste and the heavy air that comes with having sex when your sweat is more alcohol than moisture, it all kinda plays into how absolutely inflamed both parties' privates are. Also don't be afraid to go into how that hole can grip you like a vice in certain positions and especially at the height of orgasm. She also seems like the kinda girl who knows how to flex and massage you throughout, which is its own kind of eutrophic torture.
The read was fun, so thanks again for giving this one your all. And best of all, by the metric of one guy in the last thread, your fic is almost a success! Sorry my (You) is only worth half according to them.
