>>31636272If lala is my general and in love with maple, how can she defect to me when she's already on my side? Killing Eraxs would be her job description anyways. And if that was a typo and she started off as Eraxs' general she could just raw dog maple over there.
Also if I'm a benevolent leader, would I really go so far to kill prisoners of war, especially if my most loyal general asks for me to not do it? Would lala really want to go against maple's wishes, unless you are saying in this case they never spoken before and it was a one-sided love from lala?
At least make a funny twist where I always wanted to have bed-breaking, baby-making sex with lala and become super jealous and furious when she reveals her truest desires to me. She barely escapes with maple, but my bitterness turns me into a horrifying warlord that makes me go on a crusade against everyone because of my incel rage. In the act 3 climax, the heroic maple strikes me down and saves the countries from becoming consumed by a vengeful maniac.