>>7171759I've basically restarted from scratch. I just wasn't happy with most of it, and I didn't feel like I was getting across the key trait Mori has in the story, being that she is dangerously unwilling to let go of things that she has or wants(There were gonna be mentions of drawers filled to the brim with pencils sharpened down to their ends and empty pens), the rest of EN included. It was during that that I realized that the only way she would treat (You) any different from everyone else once she went mask off was that she would have sex with you, which seemed off considering you're the only person she romantically loves. I also wanted Amelia to be the one to really figure out Moris deal, but she wasn't really an active character until it was her POV, and I don't think her just being told about events as being a satisfying way to do that.
Having to rewrite the entire thing is a daunting enough task that it's killed my motivation to work on it for the next little while. Thankfully it's not my drive to write entirely, but I hate to disappoint regardless.
